Vol. 1, No. 2
September 1999

Jennifer Martenson lives in Chicago. Her work has appeared in Re: Chapbook 4 (Reference Press, 1999).

Working Notes

It is often the case that I learn more than I intend in writing poems. Preoccupations do act as magnets, but I am most interested when accidents show me something I hadn't thought of in any explicit, conscious way and allow me to read my work as if someone else had written it. Sometimes these "accidents" do seem to address questions that I circle around more consciously, and do so more effectively than any of my "conscious" attempts. For example, in "Cast" I stumbled onto the form simply because I was convinced that the lines which now occupy the position of margin notes belonged to the poem. The challenge was how to work them in. The mechanical act of placing them on the left side of the page exerted an influence over the final stages of writing and also suggested numerous readings of the form which became evident to me only after the poem was written. The relation of the synopsis, commentary, or interpretation to a text or an event; who speaks and who is spoken for; how authority is suggested or achieved in writing are among the things this form seems, at least to me, to suggest. While these issues are often present in a conscious way, finding a form to enact them happened largely by chance and on a dare. Hopefully there are more ways of reading the form than I have here suggested.

Gene Expression

A vocabulary handed

down through

letters twined in nature

nurture's alphabetic double

helixes where opposites attract

a myth encoded to protect

the public from the audible

expression of neologies

which propagate

recessive points of

view and threaten

to disorient the language

 

 

The Structure of Detachment

tangled currents, dark
submerging dark

reflections
wave as they tug

at their roots
a few weeds

plucked
from the unsteady

fragile braid, the sensate
strung together, self

within a sheen of self

         the voice
might be a line
that gropes toward
surface

dangling
in the foreground

solids where the gaze
might rest

a raft tossed out
the glittering

thread