Vol. 1, No. 2
September 1999
Headshot of Elizabeth Willis. She is wearing sunglasses and a beaded necklace.

Elizabeth Willis is the author of The Human Abstract (Penguin, 1995) and Second Law (Avenue B, 1993). She teaches creative writing and literature at Mills College in Oakland, California.

Working Notes

I can't say that I even intended to write these; that is, they're not propositional in any way. But I became fascinated by the ways in which lines arranged themselves around a focal point—generally grounded in sound and the underlying affiliations between words rather than events—and that without trying to shape them with any formal constraints, these poems emerged in roughly the same form and with roughly the same kind of interdependency. I spend a lot of time commuting so my line is often sporadic and sprung, filled with minor subject matter except for the backdrop of transitoriness, which seems to run through the sonnet as a form. And since I tend to write poems by carving away at them for months at a time, I wanted a title that suggested some kind of compression and some degree of lyric openness.

[To live in someone]

To live in someone
else's music
(the musician not the composer is free)
a divine contention
like the damp carpet
of liquored olivia trees
(something my favorite you
would say)
finding in a hollow day
a winter keeper
a paper woman
caught in the torrent
not quite falling

 

 

[Figs of lost thought]

Figs of lost thought
rainy differences and non-glides
feverish in girlways
the tenuous escape of a patient
nodding, obstinate
jeweled or pinked
a pilling station
(laughing, molten)
behind a gay exterior
or broad caplet
too tough to swallow