Vol. 1, No. 2
September 1999
A headshot of Denise Liddell Lawson.

Denise Liddell Lawson has been a member of Kelsey Street Press since 1990 and currently oversees design and production of selected titles. She received an MFA in Creative Writing from San Francisco State University, and an MA in Teaching English from the School for International Training in Brattleboro, Vermont. She teaches in the ESL programs at UC Berkeley Extension and Sonoma State University. Her poetry has been published in small press publications and two chapbooks: Where You Form the Letter L (San Francisco State University) and (EM Press).

Working Notes

If I could ask for a gift, it would be to sing. As a result, I try to bring out the music in my poems through the sounds of the words, the placement of the lines, line breaks, and punctuation. The forms emerge out of a process of copying lines over and over (in longhand) in an attempt to see which words are worth keeping. With shorter poems, I re-write the lines from memory to sift out the nonessential. The material for the poems comes from my note-taking, which includes dreams, experiences, quotations from my reading, overheard conversations, descriptions of places I've traveled, etc. These notes accumulate and then from time to time I sit down and re-read them and pull out images and ideas and lines that obsess me.

Wakefulness

 (and when does she sing)


     (sing to herself)

     (as her mother, in the morning)


     (sings)

forgetful of error
I tender
an offering of salt

 

ungainly affection,
knotted with sweetness—
cord or corridor?

 

desire, a scarlet coat;
water glass held to the skin
for coolness

 

I can’t unsay—
the night is chalked with questions
and I am wakeful

 

 

desire (comma) leviathan

2

 

the whale, white as candleflame, crosses the ocean
as easily as a woman crosses a room

 

3

 

love those who leave you and return

 

4

 

returning home,
she notices the tree beside her house
                     this, she decides, is loyalty
 

                 what is there to say except
 

a tree, rooted and solitary

 

7

 

               she takes a ruler and erases it
using, as measurement, the phases of the moon

 

 

9

 

having asked the only thing that matters
      in a postscript

 

not mine
 

contingent ardor, the sky splits with color

what is place? anything breakable

 

     tell it in the third person layered over the first

 

11

 

flank
       ravenous eye, a white camera
       succession of color, burning
 

           kindling the senses trues the blade
 

mistaking I for I and you for someone else
the history of two voices

                                   stripped

fidelitas


 

12

 

whetstone
 

                      cipher

 

last night the moon -- no, the sun --
       glory and liquid


       absence, the hollowed out
 

rainwater urgent for the sea


    not mine, but my portion

 

13

two fortunes, cracked open, identical

speaker, layer the third over the first
          kindle the senses, true the blade


as genesis, an asterisk in a french novel

fidelous in it capriciousness
 

15

 

my portion
 

strangers touch after laughter